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An Unfinished Tale

Journal Entry: Tue May 1, 2012, 1:40 PM


I'm doing a bit of tidying around my writing folders (it needs doing every now and again), and thought I'd finally admit that this particular stub is never going to get turned into anything by throwing it up here for you guys to read. It's fairly purple (and massively influenced by a most-excellent play called Scaramouche Jones) but I actually kinda like it as a trashy sci-fi opening. I just wish I had a trashy sci-fi story to go with it!

(The name of the file is "Pit Fights and Bulldogs" but, since it's just a stub, it probably needs a simpler title.)

How many of you have "unfinished tales" like this gathering dust on your harddrive? :)


Fighter

I guess I've always been a fighter. I arrived on this mortal plain with a lung full of fluid and hole in my heart; on board a battle-gray ship called Tempest, half-way between Earth and Everest. Within that dull exterior, my entrance was heralded by a riot of colour and noise: the panting purple of my mother's face, the sickly yellow of my jandiced skin, and the crimson gushings of blood that just wouldn't stop. Beeps of ship equipment, shouts of nurses, fading groans from my dear mother, were all swallowed up by my own enraged screams.

My mother didn't survive the trip to Everest. She wasn't a fighter.

That was twenty years ago. Twenty Earth years as determined by the calender-clock that hangs above the thoroughfare like Death's hourglass. Everest is a near-sun orbiter, forever angled to catch the fullest of the precious golden rays. There's no day and night here, let alone seasons to count the years with. I grew up in an ever-light world of variable-shifts and supply tokens. There are no banks on Everest and no banknotes, but everything has a price.

From the Notebook

"When a man is tired of London, he is tired of life."
~ Samuel Johnson

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=Cassildra May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the favorite on Bitten! :heart:

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=MetalMagpie May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. Congrats on the DLD. :)

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=Cassildra May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot! :heart:

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*xvintagelaces Apr 25, 2012  New member Professional General Artist
Hey, I hope I'm not asking for a lot but my name is Lacey and I'm writing a novel which at the end I hope to publish. It is a Non-Fiction Novel called Far Apart, Close in Heart. I am just wandering if you could maybe read my Introduction and Chapter 1 Part 1 and tell me what you think? It isn't long and I really could do with all the feedback I can get. I'll be happy to view your work and do the same in return if you wanted me to, if not then thank you for your time anyway.

Introduction: [link]
Chapter One, Part One: [link]


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=MetalMagpie Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sure, I'd be happy to have a look. Is it really non-fiction? (I.e. Is it all true events?)

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*xvintagelaces Apr 26, 2012  New member Professional General Artist
Yeah, it is

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=MetalMagpie Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If you don't mind me asking, is it about you?

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Hey, I just wanted to say thanks for the nod over at #FantasyAuthorsGuild - that was really nice of you :love:

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=MetalMagpie Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. You deserve a lot more recognition than you get. :)

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